Midnight Bliss

London, 1853 "I'm so bored" Edmund groaned as the city fair continued around him. He had no idea why he let his brother talk him into this. The fair was ...

This is the rest of the first chapter... They names were George, Emanuel, and Ivan.. :) First of all great story! So many people have been doing the vampire falls ...

It quite different from what I usually, I'll tell you that lol. It kind of sounds like a children's story. Are you planning to be a children's author? Anyways on ...

I had no idea that I had any replies until like a year later... how remarkable! Ugh anyways! to all the questions that were asked on my introduction post! I ...

She lied there under the stars in the luke warm spring night. Her eyes shot from star to star, picking up shapes and figures. Her mind buzzed with the incoherency ...

Hi there! It was a really good story! A little short though, but still good! But I think it was a little simple. The story was written very well, and ...

I my breathing became ragged. I could hear my heartbeat over the gunshots and shouts of pain and fear. Knowing she died in vain, I stood with her body . ...

Hey Kakali!! It is a really good story! Its like I could see for myself where she was and what she felt! Great description! It has great potential!! i encourage ...

thanks for the review! this was a chapter off of the top of my head!!! i wasn't very confident about this one lol!! thanks again for reviewing! :D

This is a powerful piece of work!!! It is just wow. I can't even find the words to describe it. I hope you conitnue this story. Just wow. Her sickness, ...

Terrific story!!!! absolutely terrific!! its like i could see it happening in my head. I could understand her laughter and why she felt the way she felt. Why she pitied ...

honestly i didn't like this chapter and i don't know how to delete it soo... i guess i'm just gonna have to do this for now lol!!!sorry

Up close, he could see the cracks in her façade now, with crushing disappointment exuding form every fault. form is supposed to be from. Besides that nice job. Your king ...

Brisk footsteps followed Georgiana into the forest. Her dress and petticoats twisted with each step she took. The dark forest whipping by her in a rush. She felt as swift ...

"Momma didn’t want me to hear here, but I heard most of what she was talking about." when you wrote that, the word here i think is supposed to be ...